You recommend viewing it in full, but it just looks like you've mass'd out effects in some strange program, it's blurry, and to be honest, an eye sore. In the normal view, it looks detailed, but the white ink effect distracts from it. I personally can't tell if you've just used pre-made effects or you actually made this by normal tools.
First of all, l always clearly state that l make this in PaintShop, not a "strange" program....although l agree, it does look blurry.
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